Sunday, December 5, 2010

Introduction for the thesis :Our college library......books.

Schools can be the vast fields where we have to obtain and gather more baggages as possible as we can . It is also a space where should find all capacities , and faculties that push us to succed but when we do not have at least the simple necessary things in our college how it is expected from us positive results and our college library has short hours , cranky libraeians and , few books.


  1. There's no connexion between your introduction and the thesis statement.Try to find another way to relate sentences.
    On a whole,it is not bad as an introduction.

  2. HI sarah thank you for your faithfulness you are always behind my mistakes and i adore who corrects for me...anyway i m not with and there is a strong relation.